Tuesday, 22 November 2011

Treatment feedback

Today my group pitched our idea for our movie opening sequence to the rest of the class and the teachers. After we had finished the pitch we got feedback from the teachers about aspects we need to change or improve.

The teachers said that the plot we had written was brilliant for the thriller genre and matched the conventions for the genre. However we were told that our opening didn't match our plot as it was too fast paced and therefore we were told to re-think our opening scene. they suggested that we slow it down and use it to show how mundane his life is such as films like american beauty. we were also told to watch the movie 'lost in translation' so today we will go away and watch the movie and get more ideas for our opening sequence.

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